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Living the Fairy Tale

ONCE UPON A TIME a lowly writer was asked to pen a story, a fairy tale to amuse the readers of a popular weblog which had the curious title of Petit Fours and Hot Tamales. It was a rather odd little world that a collection of writers had formed with their sometimes rambling musings, quotes, pictures, recipes and chatter, but her fabulous fairy tale would be seen by hundreds. And who knew? Maybe even thousands before it was all said and done. Egads! It would have to be perfect!

With her hands on the keyboard, she pursed her lips, squinted her eyes and stared on a distant spot, waiting for her muse to rain inspiration upon her fair head. After some time, with nary a word from her damned lazy muse, the writer jumped to her feet pacing and fuming. She decided to be creative on her own. After all, she was a WRITER.

Well, she thought, there must be a castle high on a hill overlooking the kingdon. It’s protected by a flying dragon, and there should be a toad that becomes a prince. The prince will be rich and handsome, the pauper maiden’s beauty beyond compare! Of course they’ll fall in love at first sight, and at some point they’ll dance in formal attire. Above all, they shall live Happily Ever After.

And so, she sat down to write.

Once upon a time .  .   .

No, no, no. Seems like she’d heard that somewhere. It wouldn’t do to be thought of as a plagiarist.

There once was a .  .   .

Not, that either. Too trite. Perhaps—

At that point, the writer’s own fair prince entered the room, slid his arms around her and nibbled at the tender flesh on her neck, making her giggle. The writer sighed, turning to receive tender kisses that caught fire.

The made-up fairy tale could wait awhile, she decided. Right now she was more interested in living her own fairy tale, basking in a union that had endured time, and staying in the place that made her happiest – in the arms of her love.

Cinthia - February 11, 2010 - 6:38 am

Good morning, everyone. Sorry I’ve been absent. My preggers daughter and her hubby came to visit…and she left me with a present…a whopping case of bronchitis. Ugh!

Anyway, Carol, I loved your post. Such a sweet little story. Take care and have a lovely day. I’ll try and get back in later on and see who else has dropped by.

Dianna Love - February 11, 2010 - 7:25 am

Sweet story. That picture of the castle reminds me of visiting Germany. I want to go back and take my Prince Charming with me. There’s something amazing about walking through old castle ruins.

Marilyn Baron - February 11, 2010 - 7:51 am

Agree with Dianna. Love the castle. Love the frog. Love the post. Very original!

Marilyn Baron

Linsey Lanier - February 11, 2010 - 7:57 am

Great story with a very happy ending. The writer didn’t do half bad. Smile An old castle in Europe with the love of your life sounds like a winner to me. Very romantic, Carol.

Gannon - February 11, 2010 - 8:07 am

Very sweet! I could definitely picture myself in a castle with my real life hero. Smile

Maxine Davis - February 11, 2010 - 8:13 am

Carol, I love it! I think the writer did great, even without her ‘damned lazy muse.’ You’re right Dianna, I walked in castle ruins on Isle of Skye and it just gave me a feeling that I was about to slip back in time – maybe I should have stayed a few minutes longer . . .

Susan - February 11, 2010 - 8:34 am

Carol,
Your right, having your own prince makes for a great fairy tale. With all the snow you are getting you have plenty of time together.

Carol Kilgore - February 11, 2010 - 11:33 am

Oh, yeah. One real prince is worth two on the page any day.

anna - February 11, 2010 - 12:27 pm

What a sweet little twist at the end! Fun blog, Carol.

Carol Burnside - February 11, 2010 - 1:42 pm

Aww, Cinthia, hugs on having the crud. Frown I’m sorry you’re sick.

Thanks, Dianna. I had fun writing it and hope to see some real castles one of these days.

Carol Burnside - February 11, 2010 - 1:45 pm

Glad you liked it Marilyn and Linsey.

Ah, Gannon, wouldn’t that be lovely to experience, just once?

Carol Burnside - February 11, 2010 - 1:46 pm

Yeah, Maxine, we can’t wait for the muse to strike or we’d never get anything written. Smile

Carol Burnside - February 11, 2010 - 1:48 pm

Susan, you said it. The gov’t offices have been closed all week. We’ve got about 3′ of packed snow right now with drifts up to 5′. Forecast says we can expect more in a few days. Ack!!! Eek!

Carol Burnside - February 11, 2010 - 1:54 pm

Exactly, Carol K! Grin

Thanks, Anna!

Sally Kilpatrick - February 11, 2010 - 3:05 pm

Cute fairy tale, Carol! I enjoyed the twist at the end!

Tami Brothers - February 11, 2010 - 8:59 pm

LOVE IT!!!! I got chills with the kiss on the neck. That’s my ticklish spot. My poor hubby can’t be romantic because all I can do is laugh. I even started giggling thinking about it.

Great story, Carol!

Tami

Sandra Elzie - February 11, 2010 - 10:03 pm

Great job, Carol.
Stay warm…hope you aren’t the one having to shovel the snow.

Sandy

Carol Burnside - February 12, 2010 - 4:13 pm

LOL, Tami, me too, but Hubby loves it when he makes me giggle.

Sandy – no way. Well, actually I would shovel if I had to. Thanks to a neighbor with a snow blower and a Hubby with more energy than sense, I don’t have to. Smile

Pam Asberry - February 12, 2010 - 9:52 pm

Aww! Unfortunately, I am in a toad-kissing phase right now… Wink

Nicki Salcedo - February 14, 2010 - 5:54 pm

Sometimes the best stories are the ones we don’t write down! Thanks for sharing, Carol.

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