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Writing Contest Hints

By Debbie Kaufman

Since tomorrow is round three of the Petit Fours and Hot Tamales Recipe for Success Write-Off, I thought I’d take a minute to discuss contest in general.   They are, at time, a helpful tool of writers everywhere and, at other times, the bane of our existence

Before I was published, I played with two different levels of the writing contest game.

Level One:

Enter to get critiques and feedback.  For me then, it was all about improving the craft.   But, even at this level, I followed a few basic rules that carried on with me.

1. I proofread and then got someone else to look at my work for errors.

2. I Read the rules and submitted accordingly.

3. I always ended on a strong hook, even if I could have entered more of my work.  Better to keep the reader/judge wanting more than to give them more and a ho-hum ending.

4. I sometimes changed my opening for maximum impact, even if I considered some of the information I left out to be necessary overall to the story.  After all, I figured if you don’t get a judge’s attention right away, you’re sunk.

If this is your level, may I suggest Georgia Romance Writers Maggie Contest?  Great critique value!

Level Two:

1. I took the feedback from contests, etc. and applied it to my new contest entries and the story as a whole.

2. I chose contests one of two ways: ones with judges who were the people I most wanted to get my work in front of for publication or the ones that winning brought enough prestige that it would get an editor’s or agent’s attention in a query.  I still suggest the Maggies.  There are many others, for example Chicago North RWA’s Fire and Ice, a contest I won a few years ago with my suspense, and the Daphnes (suspense), a contest I finaled in and got the attention of the agent who later signed me..

Despite my deliberate plans, no matter why I entered or what contest I entered, I couldn’t control the judges I got.  And face it, there’s always one.  It’s nothing personal, but someone just isn’t going to like your work.   Be prepared.

Be also prepared to accept that being a major contest winner is no guarantee of success, just like not winning is not a sign of failure.  My first book came in third in the Maggies, but was published by Harlequin Love Inspired Historical.  I also entered it into the  Golden Hearts, and the same words that my publisher raved about didn’t make it to the finals.  Such is the way of contests folks.

Now, as to our contest, the Recipe for Success Write-Off, everything I said in level one applies.

1. Don’t give us typos, unclear POV, constant verb tense changes, and other writing 101 errors.

2. Rewrite your opening if it isn’t compelling enough as it stands.  You can always change it back on a full submission to an agent.  (But, they like compelling, too)

3. Enter again.  If you didn’t make it in round one or two, throw it in again.  However, may I suggest a hard look at the previous suggestion first?

 

So folks, polish your entries, and get them set for tomorrow.  We want your first 100 words or less, polished, ending on a hook, and ready to take on the competition.  Go for it!  Best of luck.

About Debbie: Debbie Kaufman writes award-winning historical stories and enjoys spending time with her husband, her four children, her three grandchildren, and her two dogs.  Follow Debbie on Facebook, Twitter, or check out her website.

 

Marilyn Baron - March 19, 2013 - 5:16 am

Debbie, great post and great advice at any level. I’ve been so impressed by the entries to this contest. And you are so right about the Georgia Romance Writers Maggie awards. They are a great opportunity for feedback and a route to publication.

Sandra Elzie - March 19, 2013 - 7:22 am

Like Marilyn, I’ve been impressed with the entries so far. There are some great writers out there just waiting for the right opportunity to launch their work and it’s fun to be able to help out in this contest and give someone a shot at their dream.

And, Debbie’s information about contests is right on the mark. After you’ve read it over & over & over, it starts to blur and having a new pair of eyes reading it will find some of those pesky little mistakes that agents, editors, & judges hate to see.

Good luck tomorrow!!!

Linsey Lanier - March 19, 2013 - 7:57 am

I agree. That’s some really good advice, Debbie. Thanks for summing it all up. Smile

Debbie Kaufman - March 19, 2013 - 10:03 am

And, unlike a lot of other contests, you can have several tries. Anyone who has entered, but not made the semifinals, should enter again. I tally scores and some people have missed the top five cut off by small fractions Smile

Marilyn, couldn’t agree with you more.

Sandy, I love seeing the variety, but cringe for the entrant when I see the typo. I know they do too!

Linsey, I’m sure you would agree that there is so much written about contests, that it’s hard to say something new. So, I figured the basics were important.

Maxine - March 19, 2013 - 11:44 am

I agree Debbie. The feedback is great – even the crusty ones. Keeps you centered knowing you can’t please everybody.

Debbie Kaufman - March 19, 2013 - 6:16 pm

Exactly, Maxine. We’ve all gotten those judges out of left field at one time or another. The trick is to know when it’s more the judge’s personal preferences and when it’s a problem with our writing. My rule of thumb is that if two or more people are giving me similar feedback, it’s time to make a change.

Anna Doll - March 19, 2013 - 8:07 pm

Excellent advice!And don’t be surprised when one judge absolutely loves what another judge “dislikes”! Big Smile

Hildie McQueen - March 19, 2013 - 8:21 pm

Great advice I wish I’d had when I first started! Kiss

Susan Carlisle - March 20, 2013 - 7:34 pm

Thanks for the insights. I think this is one of the best things we do all year.

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